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| sXeJVeg |
| I held you in my arms as your heart beat it's last goodbye's you breath lingered on my hands even after the final one faded your broken body shuddered and you were gone. the light in your eyes dimmed a dying ember without air but it sparked a flame in my heart fed by love and grief and anger your senceless death will be avenged, you will be avenged. |
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| Anonymous |
| Wow!! Thats a nice poem. Keep up the good work. |
| Anonymous |
| [color=blue][/color] :cry: your poem was very beautiful yet simple but heartbreaking it expresses the unique moment of losing ones little friend, being torn between grief and helplessness at the same time with having to let go. let little angels run free in the sky. |
| AndyBa |
| Sad poem. :\ |
| GreenBro |
| love and pain .... :( |